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felixthecat

Very well done, yes. I agree with most of the comments. The first sentence of singularity threw me, however.
Regarding The triple Threat; that is why I stay away from Vegas, lol.
Nicely done.

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Poetwriter2011

Mitchell,

You have written three unique stories. I really like the second and third.

Great work!

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ategic.ny28

You are excellent and wow . . .
Tell me you're published professionally? I want to read more of your work!

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J.C. Laird

You write very well and have a great command of language and presentation. Why haven't you done more?

If you have, shame on me, I thought you were just a reader; I really had no idea. Great work; I'm waiting to see more!

PS. Splitting those six's was nuts.

John

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Gelöschter User

Loved the first two. All are very well written but i have to admit that like lazarus, the last one i couldn't understand much since i'm don't play card games.

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dreamthief

The first two were especially dark!

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lazarus67

The first short, I understand...I think.
The second...since I don't know much about the case, it went over my head.
And the last...again, since I'm not a card player, meant little to me, although all three are very well written.

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anklebuster

Thanks, gooduklady! I tried to make every word count.

Cheers,

Mitch

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anklebuster

Thanks, ripples! I appreciate your feedback.

Cheers,

Mitch

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Glynis Rankin

This was a lovely piece of work. I loved double trouble. Man! Wonderfully done, just wonderful!

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