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nice flow, great ending, over-all wonderful story! Amazing job!

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Great story...as all the others. But throughout I kept thinking "What a waste of hashish"...and then also had the urge to raid the fridge.

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as usual awesome opening the river reminds me of my old time haunt Tiff's that never carded bit it also wasn't the bet place to be. Then the punishment having to read the story to the school in ingenious that would have sucked o bad. !! Love the stories about these boys always entertaining !!

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Yup, I was right - it was worth every minute. I love your humor, and how well you understand the whole "getting high" thing, including how people act when...uh, not that I know a single thing about it. Ahem. Yeah. Er....

Val! You were right! Thanks for bringing him here!

Anyway, another great read, written professionally, smoothly, and with a perfect ending. You're amazing. I hope you keep posting your stories here; they're a true delight!

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How delightful to read a well put-together story that is free from spelling and grammatical issues. Not having to deal with convoluted sentences, it was a joy to read this story with no interruptions. I found the pace fast and the characters endearing. Mr. Randall's sense of humor comes forth in a gentle manner, making one smile at the indiscretions of callow youth that many of us might have made at their age. Dialogue,... mehr anzeigen