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Rgabel

Subtle, sublime and succinct! Excellent work, so much crammed into three pages. Loved it. Got my vote!! Robynn

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gooduklady

Well said, Jack!

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blackbeard

You have my vote and a star.
I like your insight. But, don't let it get you down. One day at a time. Life is still beautiful.

Jack

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blackbeard

Brutal and pessimistic

You got it right. HATE!, If hate is part of our DNA then, certainly we are doomed. Through hate man will destroy man and take down the eart with it. Well done. Like Laz says 'hate is poison' and has an insatiable thirst to destry and if Humanity doesn't deal with it ASAP your end of the world scenario, is well on it's way.

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lesliethompson

Absorbing, poetic in its rhythm and eloquence while disturbing and tremendously thought provoking. You have my kudos and my vote.

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gooduklady

I enjoyed your take on the end of the world. I agree wholeheartedly that it is we, the human beings, who have the power to make or break this planet. I do not believe in Raptures or higher powers having any influence on how we live our lives. We have the ultimate choice to do evil or live good lives....it is entirely up to us. Well done.

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countzero

I can dig it!

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evercaptivating

This was imaginative and captivating. I was like Pat, thinking it was Satan narrating. Loved this. Voted.

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lazarus67

I like this new take on how this world will end. Hate is a poison, but hating the earth, our home planet, will and has bring dire consequences.
Voted...well done.

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felixthecat

There is such irony in this short piece; a fitting entry that I believe meets the criteria of the contest, Onesky.
I particularly enjoyed your use of alliteration (stretching the definition of the term). Fertile, futile...very nicely stated. Also, "I will cut my way up corporate ladders and cut down..." Excellent!
Your ending rather surprised me. I saw Satan narrating, but...:)
Great job. My vote!