Really ,its a masterpiece.Wishing all the best in your life.
My last job before I had to go out on my own, was all the displays and set ups for a retail shop.This was so much fun I could just let my imagination run and I miss it. I have a vintage collection of Santas and I just took the picture and him and then the poem came. Glad you enjoyed it. Serena
And so true in this day and age. Great poem. Only one small change I'd recommend, but I don't really know any rules in poetry so take with a hefty grain of salt.
>"Think visions of credit cards that are pushed to the max,
I change this to:
"Think visions of credit cards pushed to the max,
I don't think you need 'that are' in there to make it work. Besides that one small change, I really liked it.
Best to you with all your work.
I managed a retail store before the economy tanked. We use to set up for Christmas in July and of course made a fantastic amount of money. I also remember my kids one year getting so much and still wanting more, I was saddened by that. Family and holiday traditions are the best memories of all. Thanks for reading my poem and I do love those stars. Serena