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A Wedding in Time:
"I heard my heart beats faster." ---> I think you meant "I heard my heart beating faster."
Your poems are good. I personally like ryhme over free verse, but your poetry is emotional and very descriptive. I personally like A Wedding In Time because I could see you walking down the aisle and everything else.