14 Kommentare
ebell1

it was taken down to be edited properly

ebell1

try it now

H, J, Macey.

O/K I can read it on site but not download will you be taking off again

ebell1

I will later I'n actually going to try to get this published in paper back but im still waiting on people to give me feedback

H, J, Macey.

Well, I like it but don't ask me to give technical advice I need help putting a sentence together!

ebell1

oh no that's good as long as its good and it's not so sloppy writ noone can understand it

H, J, Macey.

No like I said I liked it, sex and gore is a good mix! have you ever seen the comic's called girl's eaten? blood sex and cannibalism.

ebell1

no i havnt but ill look into that

H, J, Macey.

You won't have to look click on this and be prepared for gore++++++++++
http://zizki.com/dolcett/club-x

ebell1

cool!

H, J, Macey.

?!!!! Cool if that's cool what is hot to you?