You bring out the imagery very well. Keep on writing! :)

okay but i wont update till september im really busy this summer

yay! thanks ill wait till september to read it ! ^-^ its good!

Pretty good book! It could use a little revising, but besides that, it is syper good!!

thanks ;)

1Dlover4ever, You must like (Disneys- Frozen) i like it too speicial --olaf-- is freaken funny

yeah, love frozen.

:D