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This is a group for anyone that wants to have their work or ideas, read by others and critiqued or discussed, as well as read and discuss the work of others. My hope is that we can all learn for one another and help each other to grow as writers and as people. Learn to look at things in a new way, experiment with the different aspects of your writing, and push yourselves, and each other, past your... Mehr anzeigen


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Please critic Von: Gelöschter User
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He's Back By: Sarah Mushayabasa

Please Read "Fairy Tail: Dawn of Change" and Review! Von: melmmhs94
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Hi! I'd like to tell you a bit about my newest fanfic, Fairy Tail: Dawn of Change.
As I'm sure you can tell, this is a fanfic based on the anime Fairy Tail and its about a young girl named Roxanne who is teleported mysteriously from our world into Fiore. Ripped away from her family and friends, Roxanne now has to deal with her new life and decide what is important to her. Below is the actual summary.

Roxanne Simmons is an... mehr anzeigen

Flecks of Jupiter Von: Valerie Diestro
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Your reviews and suggestions are all appreciated. If there are any areas in which I have to improve my story your comments will make me happy. As a newbie writer I want to learn more as much as I can. Thank you and good day to all of you! :)

Flecks of Jupiter http://www.bookrix.com/_ebook-valerie-e-evening-diestro-flecks-of-jupiter/   A fantasy love story… Flecks writes a thousand of letters for the girl he will love forever. Rose is a girl which boys never take notice of. Not until she meets Flecks, the first b...
Song in the Sunest An Angel's Mission Von: Valerie Diestro
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This is the link for my story Song in the Sunset An Angel's Mission


Song in the Sunset . An Angel's Mission http://www.bookrix.com/_ebook-valerie-e-evening-diestro-song-in-the-sunset/ Shining student, Natalie Austin, hates Dave Park because of his lazy attitude. However, everything she feels about him changes when she catches him singing her favorite song while playing his gu...
Daeva: Black Diamond Chrysalis Von: Polkad0t
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Hey friends!

I have just completed my next full length novel titled - Daeva: Black Diamond Chrysalis. It's a young adult fantasy but have given many layers that adult audiences should be thoroughly intrigued.

I am about to enter it into a Aussie competition here and am looking for any last minute feedback I can receive to make it as good as I can. I am very excited about it as I have come up with another supernatural world... mehr anzeigen

Daeva. Black Diamond Chrysalis http://www.bookrix.com/_ebook-d-r-bolger-daeva/ It's a beautiful world, the colours suddenly become supersaturated, the bodies of those bearing life glisten, rivers dance with each molecule jumping from the water with such excited energy that th...
Wizarding War Von: melmmhs94
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Hello, everyone! I’d just like you to take a look at THE WIZARDING WAR and give me comments with ideas and what you’d like to see. I am expanding this into a series and I need plots for each individual book more than ‘I really like this! Keep going!’ messages so please, if you have time, PLEASE take a look and let me know what I can add and such. Thank you!
~Melissa Nichols


The Wizarding War http://www.bookrix.com/_ebook-anya03-the-wizarding-war/ Fenzar, previously known as James McNeill, is a wizard who has been recruited to attend a wizards school designed to not only teach the students, but also test them. With the teachers harsh reprima...
Frozen Embers Von: D. S. Novis
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I've written half a book and would love feedback :D it's called frozen embers. If anyone could give it a quick read and comment that would be awesome. I'm aware I can't spell and have appalling grammar so please ignore that haha

This one is a rollercoaster, fast, fun, dark, sexy, violent and most chillingly, a cruel type of ... Von: Polkad0t
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This one is a rollercoaster, fast, fun, dark, sexy, violent and most chillingly, a cruel type of power. My approach is artistic, thought-provoking, whislt engaging in an usual dark darker side of the story. All critque is most welcome, from book content to book covers!

(Warning: for mature audiences only)


I think I need help on this book Von: sweepmeawayluna50
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Umm... this book is totaly new for me. I'm used to writing fiction (the ones with superpowers and all that) and this one is...well... me. I'm just a chapter into this (heck not even that!!) but im curious as to know what people think about it and what I should change already. Because really. Who is going to wright a whole book only to relize that it sucks? :P

and I know there are spelling fiends out there, so I really need... mehr anzeigen

Colors of a Schitzophrenic http://www.bookrix.com/_ebook-jillian-cline-colors-of-a-schitzophrenic/ Amy used to be fine: just a girl with normal drama problems. Then things changed. Then voices came and the visions were just to terrifying to handle anymore. The voices told her horrible things and...
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Okay, so I saw your post and checked out your book. You have a brilliant idea, and have started the book amazingly in the first chapter.

However, the transition from chapter 1 to chapter 2 was confusing, there's nothing to hint at how far back into her past you have gone, and by... mehr anzeigen

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