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Passage to East Town

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Passage to East Town
creating the perfect hometown in one's own mind, an inside look into the mind of W.R. Painter,and how he escapes the pressure of everyday reality, by inventing the illusion of a perfect world.

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calandra

I was rather intrigued with your book and think you really have some substance here but one area in which I think was lacking was character development and giving the reader a feel as to what it felt like. It was as if you were telling instead of describing.

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