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The crystal forest adventure

Friendship is magic Von:
User: Varnika
The crystal forest adventure

The friendship I have in my school inspiered me to write this book the book is all about My Little Pony what me and my friends love the most.

 


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wildgoose

hi , i like the idea of a crystal forest. I can hear the crystals tinkling. When it is misty then it freezes overnight you sometimes get all the trees covered in crystals of frost, very very beautiful . Sadly where i live it rarely freezes because of the sea. But we do have small horses. i counted 9 black Shetland ponies in one field at the weekend. its great to see them in a herd instead of one on its own.
wildgoose

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Gelöschter User

Wow u have a horse I always wanted one and I used to live near the sea it was my flat and when u cross the road u r at the beach and thnx for the comments

wildgoose

no don't actually have a horse, just see them in the fields here .the Shetland ponies are very tough and can stand the cold weather; however it has rained so much and it is windy that some owners are taking them into the barn.
wildgoose

Gelöschter User

Ohh wow I love horse they r soo cute

wildgoose

a beautiful animal and sensitive
wildgoose

Gelöschter User

I know I also absolutely love Wolves and Huskies

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judycolella

What is your first language? The name on the book and that of those responding makes me think it isn't English. There are errors throughout in terms of spelling, grammar, and syntax that are easy to fix with a little language help, but I like the story. It's sweet and has all the right elements, which makes this a great start for your first book.

One suggestion I could give is that a book's chapter needs to be much longer than... mehr anzeigen

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Gelöschter User

Quite Short and sweet story !!! Nice one with friends !! Good one

1 Kommentar
Varnika

thank you

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Varnika

I hope that all of you will read it and please leave some comments so I know if to improve my book for the next time

4 Kommentare
Gelöschter User

so funny

Varnika

thankx

Gelöschter User

bogies

Varnika

u r sooooo gross

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