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Song in the Sunset

An Angel's Mission Von:
Song in the Sunset

Shining student, Natalie Austin, hates Dave Park because of his lazy attitude.

However, everything she feels about him changes when she catches him singing her favorite song while playing his guitar. Listening to his voice for the first time, it feels so gentle that its sweetness captivates her whole self, including her heart.

She is falling in love fast, and at the same time she can’t understand why she feels this way.

Her mind tells her to leave before she’s in too deep, but her heart keeps telling her to stay, and listen to his song in the sunset…


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tc

It was a fantastic story.

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Valerie Diestro

Thank you Tc for your comment and making Song in the Sunset An Angel's Mission one of your favorites :)

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robbedbygreed

Great story so far! Besides a couple of syntax jumbles, you kept me engaged and entertained. I'd love to see some of the dialogue fleshed out a little more, because right now it feels a bit choppy; You have a great base so far! Of course you want to finish writing it before going over to fix or add anything, nevertheless, it's a great story so far, and I'm excited for the story to start picking up speed now that most of the... mehr anzeigen

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Valerie Diestro

Thank you for your comment. I appreciate it a lot. Take care always! :) ^_^

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Chris-Jean

I love the premise of this story, Valerie.

If you follow Pat's & Justin's editing tips you will have a great story to feel proud of.

Please, message me when you extend it.

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Valerie Diestro

Thank you for your comment. Take care and have a good day! ^_^ :)

Valerie Diestro

Also thanks for adding Song in the Sunset to your favorites. ^_^

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Kalai

You are successful in creating life like characters. Please update. There is much space to develop.

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Valerie Diestro

Thanks for your comment, and adding Song in the Sunset to your favorites. I appreciate it a lot. Take care and have a good day ^_^

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judycolella

Excellent beginning! The Prologue makes it clear that something major and possibly tragic is going to happen to your main character and Dave, and at the end of the last chapter posted, you have him make it clear there's a lot more to him than she realized, which makes the reader want to turn the page to find out more - always the sign of a good book! Hope you keep adding to this!

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Valerie Diestro

Thank you so much for your comment, and adding Song in the Sunset as one of your favorites. It made my day, and I appreciate it a lot. Take care and have a good day! ^_^

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