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Guardian Of Winter

Book One of The Element's Magic Series Von:
Guardian Of Winter
I always liked the snow. The way it fell gently and softly from the sky above. Or, when it landed on your nose and you could see the perfect white snowflake. All in all, my favorite is when you wake up after a blizzard or a snow storm. In Pennsylvania, it was perfectly normal to wake up in early January and find the world covered in a thick layer of beautiful white snow. Great old maple trees that were once covered in green leaves in the summer, were now bare and covered in snow. Or the Ever Green trees covered in white and green. Winter is magic……. So what if I told you that magic is real?

“This magical person was born the coldest night of winter. Blessed with Pure white hair long and full. Her beauty for no one can compare, light crystal blue orbs, her face perfectly sculpted, her skin as pale as the moon for which she was born under. For she is the child snow, ‘The Guardian of winter ’”
-Rain R.

*This is the Final Cover*


Dieses Buch ist Teil der Reihe "Element's Magic"
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Guardian Of Winter
Book One of The Element's Magic Series
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Stichwörter: 
Winter, Magic, Fairytale, Snow
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Gelöschter User

this story is really cool! i like it! oh! and btw i'd recognize my bro's artwork anywhere! he did a really nice job on ur cover!
p.s.
dont forget 2 change the image thing. it says u got it from google. ;)

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xAutumnLeavesx

Thanks and Aaron did a lovely job! I forgot about that.... I need to go change it....

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RebeckDawn

I like the final cover - it would be super cool if you could make the background around her into something darker - like black swirling with blue... or something like that. It would be really dramatic. :)

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Gelöschter User

Wow I like where this is going. Really awesome story u got going. Oh and btw the cover looks
really cool.

Gelöschter User

Oh cool! I know him. I didn't know he was doing covers.

xAutumnLeavesx

after looking at his work, I immeditly asked him

Gelöschter User

Yup he's pretty good. I wish I had his talent! lol!

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Gelöschter User

haha LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! POLCE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! tell me when you do!!!!!!

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xAutumnLeavesx

lol sure thing love!

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Nina Kari

You've got the bases for a very creative and entertaining story. My only critique would be to start new paragraph for every person speaking. You've got good descriptions of the characters, though I feel they are a bit blunt or perhaps a better word is rushed. I do like the fact the story begins the way it does with the character being thrown into a"action" There were no grammar misspelling that caught my eye as I read but... mehr anzeigen

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xAutumnLeavesx

Thank you! I'm just a Middle School student with dreams of becoming a great writer! That means a lot come from you!

Nina Kari

lol No problem. And I'm just a college student with the same dream, trust me, we're in the same boat :) I'm glad I could help

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