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The world is evil

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The world is evil
Three stories:
-Runaway
-Silence
-A stormy Christmas Party

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paulashene

were truly horror as I must conclude from your title neither one was going to have a hero/heroine triumph in the end. The third being a natural disaster - well that's a toss up - stand and gape or spring into action and get out of the path.

Good job with evoking the response I think you are looking to get...Paula

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bexalicious

I really enjoyed your stories. You did a good job at making a story out of so few words. Keep up the good work!

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gothic.rue

I liked the concept behind all of your stories. Your first one is the most complex, since it's so intentionally vague--is daddy the hero or villain? I agree with the comment about reviewing your work and fixing the grammatical and/or spelling errors.
Good luck!
Rue

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tina2010

You have a good concept for your stories. Enjoy and continue to write . . . Good luck!

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