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Rich Girl & Vampire Cowboy

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Rich Girl & Vampire Cowboy
This is a story of a rich girl that falls in love with her trainer,but as she is trying to find out if he feels the same way she learns some secrets about her friends,her father,and the boy she is in love with.She might even find something about herself that she never knew.(I know its not done.I will update chapters when I can.)


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joeparente

Terrific start to a good story.
There is an issue with no spacing at the end of each sentence. This is just a minor correction. good job.
Spelling:cloths should be clothes

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Rgabel

You have a wonderful start here. Need some tightening in spelling and grammar, but great descriptions, good dialog, good character building and interplay. So where do they go from here? Robynn

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four.oclock

Interesting beginning. Like the cowboy vamp idea. Enjoyed the first installment. Hope to read more on this. :)

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