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The Storm
Sharon's tale about being mean(not always thinking about the repercussions) and having no consideration for others will stay forever fixed in your mind.

About Sharon: When she isn't writing or dancing she enjoys spending time with children and the elderly. She likes playing word games, watching Turner Classic Movies and she is an avid reader.

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Sharon Dorival

Hey Crosswaysnet, for the contest don't the judges have access to the full book?
I will consider your advice. Thanks for reading.

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Sharon Dorival

Thanks Wendy. I apreciate your comment and advice.Criticism is good since I get to know my strenghts and my weakness. This story is not part of a bigger book and when you read the complete story you will see why it is a fairy tale.What is a reasonable price for this in your opinion? I will take your advice with me.

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Sharon Dorival

Good afternoon RBG, thanks for taking time to read and comment on my work. This book is finished. What you are reading right now is the sample. I did mention who Kenneth is in the story. I appreciate your advice very much and will deffinitely take it to heart.

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First of all, why is the book for sale for $3.99? It's not finished!

Also, I can't quite make out who Kenneth is. Is he a god? Is he a personification of weather? I want answers, as all readers do. So you might want to go back and make sure what you've written is pretty clear. It's a bit messy on those pages.

Besides that, this was pretty cool. I liked the tone of the piece, as it was playful yet a tad mature. I think you've... mehr anzeigen

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It's in the flash fiction contest, but it's not flash if it's part of a bigger book. It's literally a chapter and that's not flash. Sorry!

The other criticism is the price you're selling this story for. It's excessive, but i suppose that's up to you.

So, anyway as first chapters go, (if this is what it is), this is okay. It didn't blow me away, but I only read the sample, so perhaps the good part comes later.

With regards to... mehr anzeigen

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you'll want to drop the price to 'free.' otherwise you're not going to get many reads from your peers!

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