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Untrusted: A Batman and Joker story (fanfiction/fan made)

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User: serena.1
Untrusted: A Batman and Joker story (fanfiction/fan made)
This a fanfiction only fan made I Don't own any of the character other than Izabellea I added. Izabellea is a normal teenager who just got a new, but her world changes when she is kidnapped. Will she learn the people are not who you think they are or will she make the mistake of a life time. Read and find out.

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serena.1

sorry everybody been waiting to see what happens next. I have been super busy with life, but I intend on having this episode in the next complete of days

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shadowphoneix

hmm, not bad. a few typos, but im intersested. also, MY TURN. Ill right one now. maybe ull like it.

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shadowphoneix

hmm, not bad. a few typos, but im intersested. also, MY TURN. Ill right one now. maybe ull like it.

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serena.1

thanks I try to get chapter three up. I have been vey sick and I'm trying to get sick. Plus I don't remember where I put my flash drive and i'm not a loud to use my mother-in-laws computer vey often. I have to what for my mom to bring me my computer. I know but the typos i'll fix them when I have more time on my hands

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judycolella

Interesting story line; you have Batman as a bad guy, which is very different, and I'm really curious to see where you take this. You need to do a little polishing - lots of words got left out, like "not" to talk to strangers (I believe you wrote, "my mother said to talk to strangers", for example), but those are simple, editing issues which I'm sure you'll handle once you've got the whole story done. Sounds like you have a... mehr anzeigen

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serena.1

I have been super swamped, but I am setting a goal to finally finish this story I was having fun until something came up.

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bookworm1995

Totally awesome I was a little confused with you repeating some of the actions but its really good oh also you have somemispelled words can't wait for more

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