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A Mortal Life

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A Mortal Life
Ilvichlex is a Hunter for the Brotherhood of Exile. His only job is to hunt the exiled demons that have gone rogue and commited crimes against the Brotherhood. That's all his life has been 'til he met Elizbeth. His life and heart, but a love for a mortal is always short-lived for a demon...

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felixthecat

There are moments when I was completely captivated by the scenes, Selish. You open well:) You write basically in-scene...showing, not telling.
The major plus in this introduction is you raised serious questions for the reader:) Now I must go to Hell and discover the answers.
Good job.

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angelapriest

Ok I haven't been able to read your first book yet but after reading this I can't wait to start. As soon as I am through reading the one I am on now I am going to make your's the next on my list. Great story. Want MORE MORE MORE!!! Plz let me know when you upload the other one because I will want to download it to my phone like I did your other book you helped me get to my phone.

Thanks alot
Angela

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heavenly.kaos

I like this one so far, and it's only 10 pages long! I really think you should continue with this! And be sure to let me know when you have updated your books, alright?

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midknight

AH! Its so freaking wonderful that you tied in your other story with this one! I was so surprised when he began to talk about Araken. I was like, o.o, Seriously?! Thats such a twist! The prolouge of your story was really great. It was vivid, and very real feeling. I think you should definantly keep writing it. BUT, I would like to read about how this happened...as in how Araken did all this. So, that means that its kind of an... mehr anzeigen

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amberlee9

So far it really good , I'd love to know what happens please write some more. ;)

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mf Harris

You are so awesome there are no words to describe it!!! I love Araken but I am indeed intrigued selish, as always! I can't wait to read more and see where you will lead this new (undoubtedly) handsome demon and WHOSE path he will cross along his way! :D Love it KEEP WRITING THIS!!!

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Kalai

This is the first time I am reading a story like this. Thanks for the exposure to a different world.

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