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Jasper Rose

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User: Freya
Jasper Rose
Jasper thought she was a normal girl. She had friends, good grades and a best friend. But when a new boy comes to town, what will happen to her? Secrets of her past will be revealed and her future will swerve off track.

How will she deal with these unexpected twists and turns? Will she survive?

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Freya

So this is what I've written! copied from wattpad no less O.o... lol it has no italics and no proper spacing as of yet because when i pasted it it got rid of it and i need to upload the rest so yeah... but please comment any suggestions or opinions :) ty xx

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Dadzgurl

Need more very good

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Freya

thank you cx hehe it has changed a lot now sorry, and also sorry I didn't reply i havent been on here in ages (:

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Freya

I've edited most of the story now, I will most likely update tomorrow, and if not, then some time this week.

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Try to write the words as words. I mean Cya write it as see you, works better for novels.

There are some words that need to be capitalized after a period. The story flows, but you seem to be rushing through it. At times it needs more details/description. You could do it as you edit it. Remember, take it slow, no one is running after you :). Also, watch out for verb tenses, at times you mix them.

I like the story. And try... mehr anzeigen

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Freya

Thank you, Tatyana. I appreciate the help!! =D

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Freya

I've finished chapter six, enjoy. If you have any feedback it's appreciated.

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Freya

Hey guys. So I'm up to chapter 5 and really need to know if you think it's a good book so far. It's the first book I've ever written, so if you have any pointers or notice any mistakes, please. Thank you.

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