In Transit

You never know who you could meet from Point A to Point B Von:
In Transit
Two strangers meet on a train, and a connection is revealed between them.

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I have read almost half part of the story.I am saving it for my imputs.Very soon write about it. Still the intial impression is good.It is interesting,aborbing and investigating.The characters in 'transit'do not look strangers or outsiders as that is the spirit of any journey. 'You have to be connected some where or the other. Even your silence sometimes become intolerable.Well I cannot tell you without reading it... mehr anzeigen

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Your descriptions were unique as well as characterizations. This was written very well with no mistakes or sentence problems. At first I thought that it wouldn't be long enough but you finalized it to a perfect short story. Well done./joeparente

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