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The Bond

twin life moving Von:
The Bond
this is about to girls who look like twins but with subtle differences as they deal with transformations and betrayals and rejections but they will meet their true loves as they travel all over the world.

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felixthecat

The Bond.

I've no idea how old you are. My guess is, from the genre and characters, you are young. I congratulate you for creating this little book (which I assume you will continue with?). You write fairly well! I had no problem staying in the story--kind of liked the closeness of your two main characters--but there is one thing you might want to consider as you continue. Dwell on this; it will help you. Show. Write in-scene.... mehr anzeigen

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darkangel2479

thankyou for the tip

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