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Bad for Bad

Some say Revenge is Sweet... Von:
Bad for Bad
Two Bestfriends. One Boy. One Seed. Two Suspects. One Victim.
Will revenge, commitment,love, and friendship all in one, cause a traumatic incident?

Only one can find out...

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I agree with you Ripples. More elaboration need to be done. If you don't mind, you can help me edit it? I still need to learn how to make my stories more precise

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I really appreciate the feedback. I will elaborate more on Justine and Nicole's friendship to make to store more precise and enjoyable. Bookzilla, you mentioned that my story has a lot of mistakes. If you don't mind, can you point out those mistakes besides what you said above?

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Glynis Rankin

Would have enjoyed it more if there were more background on the main characters so I could hate on the Jerk more. I also think editing needs to be done so that more people could enjoy your story, just my thoughts.

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the story is super intense, but you need to have somebody edit it for you because there are a lot of mistakes. also, to make the reader get more into the story, you should add more details about the lives of nicole and justine - more about their friendship. you should also add more about why justine decided to get together with shawn - he seems like a jerk, so you need to explain to us why she would ever do something like... mehr anzeigen

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