Dragon Dreamer

Dragon Dreamer
Steephi is not the ideal candidate for a leader of men, let alone the world. Raised in the backwoods of Syrnyai, she finds herself thrust into a world of politics, responsibilities, and danger. Can she find the strength to lead this world?

Based loosely off the world of Anne McCaffery and written 6 years ago. :)

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Love it! So good! Couldn't stop reading! Can't wait to see where you go with this :)
I do, however, have some critiques:

You have some punctuation mistakes and tiny errors of the sorts. Make sure your sentences make sense! When the dragon queen died, I didn't know what was going on. I was clueless. I still am... just a little. You need to make sure your sentences make sense and aren't too complicated.

And Steephi seems angry... mehr anzeigen

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I plan to upload the entire book onto here, but it's difficult and time-consuming. I have to re-format the entire thing every time, because of the italics used for the dragon speech. I'm glad you liked it though!

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I really like the book.

Let me know when you update it.

I can't wait to see what happens next.

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Wow and I mean wow, thats wonderful, your truly gifted with art of the written world. Love the dragons. Your description amazing. awesome read.

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I was caught immediately. 6 years-old or otherwise, your imagination and world building are stunning.
I'm left hanging, waiting for more of this unique land filled with flying dragons and queen riders:)

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