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Easy Come, Easy Go

User: renoir
Easy Come, Easy Go
She asked me to.

It's as simple as that.

I was just an innocent bystander, minding my own business, when she came up to me, and asked if I could please, pretty please, tell her story.

A thin girl, she was. Bony, too, with eyes that seemed too large for her head, and blond hair that looked too greasy.

"Tell my story," she begged.

I figured at one point, she'd been pretty and full of life. There wasn't much left of her.

Her eyes pleaded, asking please, please?

I hesitated, then nodded. I didn't have the heart to say no.

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Cheyenne, WY

Justice Stevens took up the Second Amendment in his book ""Six Amendments: How
and Why We Should Change the Constitution."" There, he suggested not simply
repealing the Second Amendment but instead a specific change to it.

The Second Amendment reads: A well regulated Militia, being necessary to the
security of a free State, the right of the people to keep and bear arms shall
not be infringed.

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i really enjoyed your story. your use of around certain sentences was interesting and sets your book apart. there were a couple times when i was confused, but i get the feeling that i'm supposed to be :)
just one thing - the ending isn't as clear as it could be. i don't want to put a spoiler in the comments section so i'll just say that you need to add another sentence or two to clarify!
great job!

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You have created a story that is both beautiful and heartbreaking. I look forward to reading more of your work - let me know when you post another book!

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