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Red

Mavis Daven lives in the small town Sitka, Alaska. Where stories of people turning into mythical creatures are told, but all of that comes true on Halloween night when Mavis discovers that the gorgeous new boy isn't who seems to be.


Logan never expected to fall head over heels for the fiery red head Mavis or would have thought that he could hide who he truly is?


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Romance
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I haven't read anything yet, my eyes hurt at the sight of a nine pages long paragraph, you need to change that, and why not write in third person?
I'm sure there's a good story in the long paragraph but since just looking at it made me tried I didn't even try to read it, I just flipped through the book to see where it would end and start a new paragraph.
I'm sorry if I sound harsh but it's better to hear this now in the... mehr anzeigen

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Anastasia:)

Sorry that its like that but I tried to change that but I couldn't start new paragraphs with out messing up the others

meagan

Why is it so sort ?

Laya

i LOVE THIS BOOK!
WRITE MORE BOOKS LIKE THIS

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