Oh-I didn't know how to spell it so I used spell check haha, goes to show you spell check doesn't really help. Thank you guys for the comments, I am so happy you like it. I am thinking of adding more maybe after the contest I have a few ideas for it.
Hauntingly strange story which kept my interest. Not too certain about the ending...was he or wasn't he? Nevertheless, well written and very enjoyable. One tiny correction please...change "canape" to "canopy" - one is a bite of food and the other covers a bed!. Well done!