Great story, with thorough descriptions to set the scene. It sounds like a place I wouldn't mind spending some time on a vacation. I liked the image of two beings floating together in space. Was his spirit with her and his body on earth? I wasn't sure at the end. You should definitely be writing novels. Your talent extends to many genres.
I enjoyed your descriptions in this story. They were rich and vivid, depicting a dream sequence that drew me in. I thought the ending was mysterious and it offered a glimpse of astral projection or something similar. You are very talented, Pat. Thank you for sharing.
Couldn't find anything wrong with this. Like most of the flash-fiction entries, it sounds like the beginning of something wonderful. Your originality was superb; crafting a landscape that was outlandish and incredible. The premise was good too. Excellent polish and style.