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Sadness
This is just something that I decided to write on a whim. While I don't understand the pain and sadness that others hold in their hearts, I want to lessen the pain and show them the way I see sadness...

I also want to add that I'm sorry if this brings back terrible memories and that I hope that you can understand why I wrote this.

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felixthecat

Your grammar far exceeds your age, first off. I sense also that you think deeply...and sympathetically concerning your peers. I like that.

You misspelled only one word. That in itself is a feather in your cap, You end with an invitation...so comforting. The entire short piece brought to mind the lives of Bill Wilson and Dr. Bob Smith, oddly enough. One who has suffered is the one who can truly help others who are suffering.

Nice, nice job, Nghi.

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Igneous321

Thank you! I am glad you feel that way! I might actually go back into this book and edit it but I feel that it is fine in it's own way. I do want to know what I've spelled wrong as well, considering my laptop doesn't have spell check.

felixthecat

You know, I like your analogies very much..."Being dragged down by the weight of sadness matches the weight...by an anvil." Wonderful. Visual.

The typo: Page 3, last paragraph. "think" should be "thinking" in the sentence, "While others spend their time think of the future..."... mehr anzeigen

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Gelöschter User

This had me bauling in seconds. I havent cried in ten years.

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Igneous321

Thanx! I was crying while writing this! Knowing that my book was able to bring out that emotion to my audience makes me happy!

Gelöschter User

c:' ya. Ya but thanks for breaking the schools tough girls reckord on not crying XD

Igneous321

Yeah. I usually don't cry at all. I have a messed up mind...I started to laugh once when I saw a character die on TV. I didn't hate the character either, I just couldn't feel sad.

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