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Goodbye Earth

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User: xenawp3
Goodbye Earth
It is the end of the world. Emily and Craig are battling for their life. They feel powerless as mother nature is deystorying their whole planet. The sun is slowly moving towards the Earth.

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xenawp3

thankyou :)

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james1989

this is a good book i think it has a good chance of winning i hope people vote for you.. xxx

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ilovemagic

i cant believe you havent got more votes than nine. this is a brill book! keep going :P ive read it twice

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xenawp3

i agree it needs to be more detailed and everything, thanks for all the votes nd everything :)

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stouttr74

I saved your book to my favorites and I gave you a vote because you are a very great writer and I like how youare descriptive:)

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felixthecat

I liked this very much, Natalie! It was short. It was also charming, sad, and romantic:).
You adhered to the contest theme, and I was impressed with that!
I'd like to see you go back to the opening (in your file manuscript) and enter that subway car with your characters. As Stephanie said, extend the scene(s) a bit. WHAT do you see as you stand there? Write it out. Walk with them through the book:) Try it. Tell us what they see... mehr anzeigen

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evercaptivating

But also sweet. I would have like it to be more detailed and have more of a build up, but good job.

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bookworm1995

It was awesome! I don't usually like science but you made me interested. Keep up the good work

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