In "The Cup of Divine Love" Muhammad Naveed Ahmed (Emmenay) quotes and responds to the famous Rubaiyat of Omar Khayyam. Rubaiyat are quatrains written in four lines. The first two and the last lines rhyme while the third line is distinct. The responses here are in English as the rubaiyat are translations by Edward Fitzgerald and other eminent English translators.
I enjoyed your response and your idea. Actually Omar khayyam's quests are much more philosophical and existentialist, while your responses are much more physical and point more to passion and pleasures. Good job anyway.