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Beyond the Floating Islands

Adrift in Burma Von:
User: mirandabm
Beyond the Floating Islands
Three stories set in Burma. Part of what I hope will be a longer book. Entered in the "My Best Fiction" competition

Stichwörter: 
Exotica, travel
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rebekahjennings

Hi Miranda,

I'm reading your story now, sorry it has taken so long.

Some feedback:

Pg 6: The souls of our feet burn through rubber sandels. This sentence is a little confused in its meaning. It sounds as though the feet have the powers of fire and they can burn their way through sandels. Lol...

Pg 8: Why do you say the sun is trembling. Does it have something to do with the way it looks to the eye, like heat is causing an... mehr anzeigen

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etelizabeth

I love stories that deal with cultures different from our own. You've done a grand job. Thanks for the glimpse into the everyday world of such a unique place! I voted. Elizabeth

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lborgaard

There are some grammatical errors but, not being an editor myself, I am reluctant to try and point them all out. Your story is nice, gets the reader out of the chair and into another world. You got my vote.

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mirandabm

Help - I wish you would point out the errors! Sometimes I write something that isn't strictly grammatical because it feels right and sometimes freer that way, and as I'm English my spelling isn't always the same as yours. Unintentional errors need sorting though. Thanks for the... mehr anzeigen

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briandoswell

. . peace that exists in those Far eastern cities. I spent some time in Cheng Mei in northern Thailand and I could recall the smells of the place in your text. I liked this a lot and I would love to read the full length book when it appears.

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mirandabm

Thanks Brian,
I suppose Burma's a bit like Chiengmai only fifty years behind in terms of development. Glad you like the stories.

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Carol Wills

Oh, well done for getting it into the contest. I love this collection. As someone who will probably never see Burma, it makes me feel as though I've been there. Well written and beautiful visuals of an exotic land. Carol x

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mirandabm

Thanks so much Carol, and thanks for your help. Bit silly of me
to have told people about it without having actually entered it!

mirandabm

Thanks so much Carol, and thanks for your help. Bit silly of me
to have told people about it without having actually entered it!

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uksoulmate

Hi Miranda I loved this book and it was full of action and ethnic and cultural detail I read it without a pause. Best wishes with the full book. Thanks for sharing all your knowledge of burma with us a delight. Love - JOHN

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