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User: mkidd6
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Rachael’s parents turn to the occult in order to contact their dead son. Who will protect a the young girl from the evil grows stronger behind closed doors?

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Short Story, thriller
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wells12

Very well done. Flowed well and kept me reading. Beautiful story. As the bible says "with the heart of a child." I look forward to reading your other books.

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epoch1

Great story that shows what faith can do when we truly need help.

And there is no faith or love stronger than that of a child's.

Sometimes all you really need to do is believe.

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Gelöschter User

I had to read this one again. Wow...your storytelling abilities never cease to amaze me. Well done. This story shows the power of faith.

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mkidd6

Thank you. I did upload in PDF and meant to go back and do it the correct way, but forgot. I've corrected it. :0)

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J.C. Laird

Easier to appreciate the quality of your writing. I believe you uploaded in PDF. Redo it in the normal BookRix upload method.

BECAUSE you are an excellent writer and I'd like everybody to be able to see just how good you are.

Expand your range, your word count; you have all the tools to excel. It's easy enough for all to see.

Oh, yes. This was a great little story with maximum impact.

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felixthecat

Of course...the child's imagined terrors becoming real, and all because of her parents' depraved "game", which is no game.
You showed Rachel's emotions perfectly, employed back story exactly as needed in the space allowed. I am struck by the highest quality of this short work. Congratulations :) :) :)

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