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He Called it Art

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User: epoch1
He Called it Art
The late evening light he'd worked by was casting long shadows across his workspace. He'd needed to work fast before he lost the best of its illumination. He usually took his time when working. He loved to linger, stepping back frequently,

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Art, horror, murder, killer, insane
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Coco B

As the other said, we could see the ending come. I guess it might be because the title that gives too much away? But it was great!

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lapseofmind

I really enjoyed this little 'masterpiece' though I do feel you used the word "he" a bit too much. Then again, how else could you tell the story? Anyway, very nice work.

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glenmarcus

After reading your other FF entries, I kind of had a feeling where this was going. I like this one the best since it lead me along slowly and meticulously and got me with the mirror.

Good luck in the contest sir...one more vote.

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Gelöschter User

I have read this twice. I am amazed at how you pack such a wallop in so few words. I loved the ending. You have my vote.

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lazarus67

I expected this ending right from the opening sentence. Maybe you are getting too predictable...lol.

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J.C. Laird

That was a maximum impact "zinger". A great example of flash fiction!

If you ever decided to write a horror story novel, this would be the perfect bad guy and plot. This definitely pulled one of my votes.

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jacki137

Another fine piece of scare from Michael Cannata aka Mr. Gruesome.

1 vote coming your way

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