I don't expect you will ever add to this. There is no need, the point is made. She sees him and she remembers him. I suppose some will ask what will she do about it. Others will ask what will he do about it.
It was actually really good, not at all what I expected it to be. there were a few grammer and spelling mistakes here and there but I do that all the time too. Overall a very good begining, please tell me when you write more.