Suchen
  • Alle Suchergebnisse
  • Bücher
  • User
  • Gruppen
  • FAQs

The Truth

Von:
User: megan.a.
The Truth
Max gets seriously hurt while on her brothers watch. Yet they don't want to take her to the hospital. They say she will learn what she needs all in time, in time. But will she have enough time to find out? Will she discover her families secret before they explain to her. Will she hear the unbarring truth of her family?

Stichwörter: 
wolf, truth, love, secrets
Beiträge und Kommentare
Wichtiger Beitrag
robbedbygreed

A Quick Review

Nice story. Can't wait to read the rest :)

However, I do have a few critiques:

First off, the beginning starts real fast pace and I have to seek out bits and pieces of information about the characters and settings. This isn't all together bad, but make sure you let the reader know enough of what's going on that they don't get confused.

Now, a lot of the action you describe reads like a list. He did this, she did... mehr anzeigen

1 Kommentar
megan.a.

Thanks, that helped me alot. I'll get too it when im not busy with my school crap either. :)

Wichtiger Beitrag
megan.a.

Thank you, I know that there is some grammar errors. I plan on fixing them when im all done with the book.

Wichtiger Beitrag
bookworm1995

Man that's the most enticing book I ever read! You got some grammar and phonetic errors, but dang it was great.. I look forward to more.

Wichtiger Beitrag
mutter8

it's good so far. can't wait till you write more. and i have worked on my book. just not updated it yet. so deal with it. kk? lol

Wichtiger Beitrag
mutter8

it's good so far. can't wait till you write more. and i have worked on my book. just not updated it yet. so deal with it. kk? lol

Wichtiger Beitrag
mutter8

it's good so far. can't wait till you write more. and i have worked on my book. just not updated it yet. so deal with it. kk? lol

Wichtiger Beitrag
mutter8

yes and ur an odd ball. hope u survive school wit me! and i loave the book so far. thx for describing me so well. but oscar the grouch is so much more my style. and cookie monster! lol but other then that it's great. well it's great any ways hahahaha!!!! i shuld shut up now.

Weitere Beiträge anzeigen
Um eine optimale Funktionsweise zu gewährleisten, verwendet unsere Website Cookies. Durch die Nutzung der Website stimmst Du der Verwendung von Cookies zu. Mehr Infos
OK
Top of page
Kein Miniaturbild Entfernen Bitte wähle einen Grund aus Bitte gib die Stelle im Buch an. de de_DE