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vampire werewolf love

by:Mary Wade/Kimberly Olvera Von:
vampire werewolf love
THIS IS ABOUT A GIRL NAMED KIM,A GIRL NAMED MARY,A GUY NAMED QUINTON,AND A GUY NAMED PRESTON

P.S-ME AND MY B.F.F ARE WRITING THIS BOOK TOGETHER AND ME AND WE ARE GOING TO WRITE EVERY BOOK TOGETHER AND WE ARE SHARING THE SAME ACCOUNT

~YOUR ONE AND ONLY(ROCKING_GIRLS_MARY/AND KIMBERLY


Dieses Buch ist Teil der Reihe "vampire and werewolf love"
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by:Mary Wade/Kimberly Olvera
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Romance, Drama, Secrets
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The Twister

There's a lot of grammar mistakes, at times your sentences wouldn't make sense. Unless it's been editing right now then I guess you can fix it up! XD but so far you did a good job! Keep going and don't forget to fix those mistakes

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judycolella

I think the best way to see if you've done this right is to look at a published book that you enjoyed reading. "Twilight," "Harry Potter," the Pendragon series or even Judy Blume books will show - if you make note of it - that there are paragraphs in published stories. The reason for these is to separate dialogue and action so the reader knows who is talking, who is doing something specific, and how the story is moving. If... mehr anzeigen

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Rocking_Girls_Mary&Kimberly546

its b\still being edited

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The Twister

So far your story is a working progress, its no surprise since you started out. It was the same thing with me when I published my first book XD You really need to get rid of that underlining and font, it makes the story hard to look at and makes it confusing sometimes. At times I got lost because there were direct speech but you didn't put the speech dialect (" " ) <--- You have to work on your grammar and spelling other than... mehr anzeigen

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The Twister

Np! XD if you work on those things, I know you and your friends book will turn out amazing <3

Rocking_Girls_Mary&Kimberly546

k and thanks for ur help if u have any other ideas tell me please tell me

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