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Any 0318's Panic

The Exo-Ship Wars Series Von:
User: Magnestro
Any 0318's Panic

Who do you think you're dealing with?  Any0318 and Captain Magno are locked into a new battle against their most formidable foe named La Femagna to begin a new series entitled the Exo-Ship Wars and tensions are mounting extraordinarily high.  Both Any0318 and Captain Magno believe that they are the leaders of the Physical Realm still, despite such a new offensive attack by La Femagna that proves to be a great challenge for control of the Physical Realm.  It's just now beginning.  The situation is heating up and who knows what might happen next.  This definitely is going to be a great beginning to an interesting and twisted and curved plot.  This is an intensely competitive rivalry for the control of the entire physical realm and there's no telling how dangerous this entire situation can possibly become.  Reader beware, you must keep an open mind because this is the beginning of the suspense of a brand new series.  Any0318 has really panicked this time and is extremely unsure of what to expect from La Femagna this time.  Any 0318 and Captain Magno must work very hard to prevent La Femagna from taking asunder.  This is just the beginning......


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judycolella

I really like the idea of this series. It has great possibilities. I would, however, recommend that you not put it up for sale yet, since there are number of things you should consider editing.

Watch your use of adverbs (never begin a sentence with one - "frustratingly" is awkward and leaves the reader wondering who is supposed to be frustrated: them or the Captain). Also, the beginning is what editors and publishers call an... mehr anzeigen

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Magnestro

Ok great, awesome, Would you mind telling me everything that's wrong with it? I'd like to edit it entirely. Furthermore, I tried with the front cover, but I'm going to re-release it with a cover from selfpubcover.com or shutterstock.com. Now I've noticed that your profile does... mehr anzeigen

Magnestro

How many books did you write? I didn't know that you liked writing books also.

Magnestro

Are you going to read The Deadly Dynasty: The Awfully Deceptive And Secretive Beginning? That's Deadly Dynasty but I edited it like you told me. Please read it and tell me what you think.

judycolella

Marketing your book takes a lot more than that. A lot of those "friends" are just people who sent friend requests, but who I really don't have any connection with. As far as do I write, yes. I've written over 75 short stories and full-length novels, and a number of them are... mehr anzeigen

Stories About the Rain https://www.bookrix.com/_ebook-aaron-redfern-stories-about-the-rain/ I remember her best as a brightness: a splash of amber against the rain, wet and blurred, her hair pulled up in the imagined style of a dead people. It always rains on Papho, drip-mists and drobbl...
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