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Just Friends

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Just Friends

A girl with big dreams and a big personality. Josie. Blinded by boys at school, Josie doesn't know what boy to choose. Better yet, if he likes her back! 

 

 

Read on to find out!

 

 

 

 


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✖️Charlie's Angel✖️

Yeah yeah YEah

babycarrots

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Gelöschter User

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Sweetcakes44

Well, one thing I notice right away is that you say her dad is lying on the bed caughing. The word cough, is spelled like cough. Just a minor edit, and more can be made. There are also certain parts that seem random, like the part where you mention that she skipped a grade. Another thing-as a direct quote from the text, it says, "Hey kid, what's your name little boy?" This is being said to the main character, which I thought... mehr anzeigen

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babycarrots

Awhh! Oh my gosh! You're such a help!!! Thank you so much!! Also, they call her a little boy because they're making her feel bad telling her she looks like a boy. Anyway, thanks so much!!

Sweetcakes44

Sure! If you want more feedback, just tell me.

babycarrots

Please! I would really appreciate it!

Sweetcakes44

BTW, you are SUCH a good writer. This book is astounding.

babycarrots

Awhhhhh thank you so much!!!

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J. M. Rivers

Hmm...interesting. This needs a lot of work to fill the loop holes but so far so good.

So the lead is in a phase of her life where she just wants a boyfriend and all the guys she's interested in are either taken or mean? Hmm...

2 Kommentare
babycarrots

Yeah, basically. So that means they're "Just Friends" but I'm still working on it, so more will come soon :)

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Gelöschter User

Wow Madison... and you say you CAN'T WRITE?! who do you think your kidding!? YOU CAN WRITE! and GUESS WHAT?! you write well!! like SUPER WELL!!! pleasepleasepleaseplease update?!?!?!?!

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babycarrots

Thank you soooo much! I really appreciate comments like this!! I'll update soon! I update a lot so, I'll let you know when I do :)

Gelöschter User

YAY! thankyou!!

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Chris-Jean

I am looking forward to reading more of this story, Madison. I hope you continue to develop it over the Easter holidays.

1 Kommentar
babycarrots

Thank you :) Just to let you know, it's updated! If you would like to continue reading.

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Rachelle

i like this book so far, when is the next time u think you'll be updating??

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babycarrots

thnx! I update when I have free time. Most of the time, I add a couple sentences, on the weekend I add a lot because I have a lot of time.

Rachelle

ok thanks for telling me i can't wait to read more :)

babycarrots

Updated :)

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