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A Day At Candy Land

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User: maddie6
A Day At Candy Land
Three friends are on there way to Hawaii and go the wrong way.By the time they relize that they went the wrong way its to late to turn around.READ ON TO FIND WERE THEY ARE AND WHAT THEY DO.

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snickers.2

ok so its good but you need to detail some things.
1. you need to tell the reader why the characters were going to Hawaii.
2. what are the characters names.
3. what was the trip to Hawaii like and why/how did the characters get lost.

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