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A Night at the Lake

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User: lucky97
A Night at the Lake
Happy Halloween to everyone! This is a short horror story, twinged with a bit of romance. It was written for an English class contest. Try it out! You might like it;)

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~~Missy~~

Are you planning to add to this story?

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lucky97

Oh no, it's just a short story. I wrote it for my English class. sorry!:((((

~~Missy~~

Not a problem! Was just hoping there would be more to it, like who was stalking around in the woods and what happens to the characters.

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keara

WHA!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!!?!? NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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robbedbygreed

This is a wonderful story that reminds me a bit of my family when we visited our grandmother in Texas. But my sister and I never met any boys, haha ;)

However, in the beginning you have the word "I" in a lot of the sentences. It gets distracting sometimes. And though I think you should try and change some of that around, it's fine if you don't want to. Cause once I got past the first page, I didn't notice it anymore.

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