Great Story, loved it!
Good story, I like the book, and there is another best book to read is The Perfect Author, you can read it on http://theperfectauthor.in Really mind blowing, worth to read.
I don't understand on certain pages your English is backwards and also you have repeated wording such as I am man, I am a man... I am a woman, I am a woman.... Asian, Asian, Asian
.. Also I love to have fun, but not with you. I am confused at how this was not proof read properly cause the context of this sorry tends to be all over the place.