I don't understand on certain pages your English is backwards and also you have repeated wording such as I am man, I am a man... I am a woman, I am a woman.... Asian, Asian, Asian
.. Also I love to have fun, but not with you. I am confused at how this was not proof read properly cause the context of this sorry tends to be all over the place.
I would be honoured for any and all feedback and or opinions on my new book "Confessional"
Please and Thank you,
I just started the reading, I can see that you are good. Thaaanks, it was the first book I read here since I got back. I will give you a further critique when I'm done, that, if you want to. I will finish it in 3hrs maybe, so I can give it right away taking advantage on my sleep over with a smooth wifi connect'n that I didn't enjoy often these days. So, uh, I'll go back to my reading then. :)