When implausible events occur

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When implausible events occur
Love...What is it all about? Nobody really knows, but everybody has an opinion and a story. And this is the story of a boy named Alex and a girl named Diana and how a series of highly implausible events changed their relationship forever: and made for an interesting self-discovery journey.

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relationship, love, comedy, NA
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Lucia Morosanu

I am pleased to announce that the version up for sale has been properly edited and polished.
Hope you'll enjoy reading it as much as I've enjoyed writing it!

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madmonk

All in All a good book some parts in the middle were long and boring and hard to keep track of but it picked up again towards the end. to your second half he make some good book covers

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Lucia Morosanu

Thanks for the feedback! I'll tell my boyfriend his cover was appreciated :)

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alcalm

Yeah, wicked writer vibes for sure, yeah proper rocking story, real cool cover it's a wicked visual that. Nice one dude,sorry got round late to reading it, though got to say it kinda tripped me out a bit too!!!

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Lucia Morosanu

Thanks man! Better late than never, right :)

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Glynis Rankin

I agree! I love this story and read in in one sitting, which speaks volumes. You have a way with words in this story, that captures the reader and hooks them from the start. A few issues that the others mentioned and like Prandall said you have introduced Victor, without his connection to the others. Yet all and all a wonderfully well written story that will appeal to a wide audience. Love the cover, how did you make that ...It's great!

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Lucia Morosanu

Thank you so much. I was a bit nervous about how this piece would be received and I am so happy to get such wonderful feedback. I'll use your suggestions and improve the story. Thanks for that as well.

The cover was made by my boyfriend, who is a graphic designer. He's a bit smug... mehr anzeigen

Glynis Rankin

You have talent and imagination, that is a good combination for any writer. I wish you much success in your future. Author :) Tell your young man his is a true artist, you both are.

Lucia Morosanu

A BIG THANKS from both of us!

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prandall

I'd like to affirm much of what Rebecca said in her review. I absolutely loved the dialogue and the unique phrasing throughout. I also loved the honesty of the characters' reactions to events. It felt very real and not contrived.

There were a couple of references to "Jamie" that should be changed. Also, I wondered about the introduction of Victor. I would have preferred a bit of background info as to his relationship with Die... mehr anzeigen

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Lucia Morosanu

Thank you so much for the comment. I'll make the changes you pointed out.

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RebeckDawn

I love the uniqueness of your dialogue (sometimes it's almost hard to follow because you're just getting involved with these new characters, but they are already so familiar with each other's rhythm) - and the thoughtfulness of each character - they are developed into such separate entities, each one has their own way of talking and approaching - There is something really visual about them as well, like I can imagine their... mehr anzeigen

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RebeckDawn

Oh - and I love your cover.

Lucia Morosanu

Thank you so much for your lovely review. I'm going to correct the mistakes, I appreciate you pointing them out. :))

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