Thats a good poem. It flows really. The desires of people can be brought out as dream form, i feel it's a healing proccess to not pursue things that are a distant probability in the waking world. Liked it alot.
You are so gifted with rhythm and rhyme. Love the meter of this poem. This is the type of poetry I was taught in school and I love a good solid rhyming poem. This let's us have a peek into the longing of love. Beautifully done. Robynn