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A Deadly Drive-by book one

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A Deadly Drive-by book one

A frightening short story about Drive-by shootings, resulting in two innocent children becoming victims of gang violence in our inner cities.


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mitcheroo

Hi! Finally got around to read this, per your invitation after your encouraging praise for 'Weather on Krypton.' Been busy, and I'm a terrible proscratinator.

First: Despite problems there is a gritty freshness here. A genuinely interesting story, which is saying a lot compared to most other writers on BookRix. There is what I call 'over-writing' (a common error for new writers), yet most of the time 'Drive-by' didn't *feel*... mehr anzeigen

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sjlotz

I read your story, made me sad to think about the useless killings of our children. There needs to be a little clean up on your grammar, my story did too. Good luck.

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tobias12345

The Story seems so real. Very realist, which may a lot of sense in detail.

Tobias B

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lbolden.books

Hi poohda.

Thanks for all of your support. I had to add some additional material to the storyline...

Linda B

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lbolden.books

Hi Dave,

I hope everyone feels as you do about the story and I am glad that it is uncommon where you live. Thanks for taking the time out to read the story and for your comments.

Linda B

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daveburgess

Hi Linda
I have just finished your book and I really enoyed it. Your subect was something that must terrify every parent. Drive by shootings are very uncommon here, I hope it stays that way also.
A very emotional read, well done and I look forward to reading your other books

Dave

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