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Thief of Fire

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User: lilyrose
Thief of Fire
Like a fool, she doesn’t believe him when he says that he is dangerous. He is too gentle; he has no claws, no fangs. She forgets that some snakes can kill with an embrace.

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psychic vampire, damnation
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LoneWolfGaming131

READ ON OR DIE TONIGHT AT 10:35 P.M 9 years ago a person named Jerry got dared to sleep in a house that was believed haunted. The next day his friends waited for him outside the house...... They had to go inside and search for him. They went through every room exept the attic. He wasn't supposed to sleep there. He was supposed to sleep in the living room they went to the attic
. They saw Jerry's corpse and they just left... mehr anzeigen

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skyangel

Well what can I possibly say that hasn't already been written! I'll repeat myself by saying that your work is always of the highest class and with great attention to emotional detail. I've read other stories by you along similar lines so I'm pretty sure that if you import them here your readers will be in for a real treat.

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authorbea

What a fantastic story. Your writing skill and the imagery you have displayed is truly a craft!!!
Belinda

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four.oclock

Just returned to read the last pages. Truly awesome story. Not sure if I've commented before but loved the artistic and intelligent writing that just kept me turning the pages.

Thanks for this great read.

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lilyrose

hey, thank you so much for the really nice compliment. I means a lot that you took the time, not to mention that you liked what I wrote :-)

Thanks again

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judycolella

Beautiful imagery, and a fascinating take on what seems to be several ancient mythologies woven together. Well done, indeed!

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lilyrose

Thank you, I'm really glad you liked it, and I really appreciate getting the feedback. Honestly, I've gotten more from this site when I have anywhere else I think. When you labor in the dark for sop long it's nice to hear that people like what you're doing. :-)

take care

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lazarus67

I finished your story, as promised.
Words, per se, are in themselves dull, but you managed to take words, and as a master weaver, turn them into a visually fantastic short story; and so poetic.
If ever a flesh and bone finger were able to touch pure emotion, this would be the time.
You got my vote.
Laz

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lilyrose

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thank you for that. I'm actually not used to getting such nice responses to my stuff. So thank you for taking the time. :-)

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