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A Fairy Long Night

The Adventures of Zeke and Zak Von:
A Fairy Long Night
Two not-so-smart apprentice fairies, on their first important assignments, find that being the number one assistants to THE BOSS is a little harder than it looks. The first two stories in a series.

Stichwörter: 
Children's short story, Fairies
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xmeli.j.nightlyx

This was a very cute and entertaining story! I loved Zeke and Zak, they were very funny characters. You did a great job in writing it and I'm sure many kids would love a story like this. I'm a kid at heart so I know I loved it :D

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indie23

A funny and cute story. I was definitely entertained, and would have liked to read more. :)

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rgabel

Review - A delightfully entertaining tale! Love the fairy-isms. What imagination. I can't imagine a child not enjoying this story. Moved quickly, energetically and an easy read. Great job. Robynn

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Chris-Jean

I loved this story the first time around, & being a child at heart I enjoyed it the second time around. It's great to know that your story will be read by children around the world. Chris

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glenmarcus

I've got a little neice that will just love Zak and Zeke. Thanks for sharing Lenora, it is wonderful.

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lenora.books

I posted the 3rd story in the series A Fairy Slow Burn today. I'm glad you enjoyed the first two.

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judycolella

This is absolutely adorable, and continues to make me giggle - what a great story! Any child who gets this read to him or her will be delighted, and probably remember it forever. Awesomeness with wings! "D

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lenora.books

So glad you enjoyed it, Judy.

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epoch1

My granddaughter is asking about chapter 3... So am I. :-)

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lenora.books

LOL...epoch 1, the third story is in the works, tentatively titled A Fairy Slow Burn (think summertime, the beach, you get the picture). Thank you for asking! What is your granddaughter's name? Since she's enjoying these guys so much, I should name a character after her.

epoch1

Her name is, Morgan, and she is just the sort of 4 year old diva that would love to see her name in print! Thanks so much for offering. She'll be even more eager now.

lenora.books

Will do!

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lenora.books

Thanks Dave! I've sent this off to children's literary agents. If no bites, then I'll self publish. I'm working on sequels now. So happy you think your greats would love them!

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♥ davebccanada ♥

These two munchkins deserve more exposure, Lenora. What a delightful concept. In some instances the sentence structure may be a bit complex but I think that is how we learn. I don't know as I would change it much, IMHO. My greats would love it.

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robbedbygreed

This is quite cute. A perfect children's story. A familiar story (loved the FNN part) for me, but for a child... well, it would be so exciting!
However,There are several instances where the sentences are awkward and seemingly incomplete. I'd encourage you to read through it out loud to catch any awkward sentences or words. Otherwise, this is good!

I think my little cousin would love this story :)

---RbG

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