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The Vampire's tooth

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User: lazarus67
The Vampire's tooth
A tall tale about an adventurous encounter with a vampire...maybe.

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Gelöschter User

well written, i enjoyed it

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Drighla

The humor is so brilliant! Thank you for such a great story! :)

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lazarus67

Thank you. There's more other stories you might...no, will enjoy.

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J. M. Rivers

Okay, first my heart....now my mind?! Not fair!

My mind is trying to understand what just happened and how you came up with it. Wow.

I was taking time to digest this, I still am. What?

J. M. Rivers

I'll try.

lazarus67
Destined to be his bride http://www.bookrix.com/_ebook-lazarus-destined-to-be-his-bride/
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Gelöschter User

You sure know how to spin a tale, Laz. You have the gift, tis sure. LOL I loved it.

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lazarus67

This was sort of an anti-vampire story....with a twist...of course. thanks.

William S. Taylor

Does the name Quasimodo ring a bell.

lazarus67

Ar ar

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Gelöschter User

This is GOOD, Laz. I've forgotten how elegantly you paint pictures with words. The way in which the vampire is dealt with makes me chuckle. :) Way to go.

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lazarus67

Thanks Mary. Appreciate your comment.

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petra michelle

There's no mincing words, here; your language and setting descriptions were tight. I couldn't stop reading in the way you'd already set up the story and developed characters that play off one another well. Was intrigued. I'm not sure he is, Laz. Is he?

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lazarus67

Ain't sayin'

petra michelle

Ooooooooooh! ;))

lazarus67

I might write a sequel.

petra michelle

That would be merciful to your readers, Laz. :))

lazarus67

hahaha

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felixthecat

This was a REALLY good one, Laz.

There were some things that made me "WOW" as I read. "A friendly housefly came by and lit..." A great little, humorous and well-placed two sentences that added MORE life to the story (you're story:) The old codger was nicely displayed through his dialogue throughout:) Just another step up for you in this one!

The capper, though, was the WAY he defeated the anemic vamp, lol. Who woulda' thunk... mehr anzeigen

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lazarus67

Your comment brings tears to my eyes...lol. Thanks a lot!.

lazarus67

And n...it's not the garlic that wets my eyes

lazarus67

I've enjoyed tzatziki that would knock your socks off.

felixthecat

Lol. Nut!

lazarus67

Nuts...Yes I am...lol.

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judycolella

When I got to the part about all that garlic in the food, I thought the vampire might have bitten the guy, gotten poisoned by the garlic-tainted blood, and as he pulled out of the old guy's neck in a panic, one of his fangs got stuck. As usual, though, Judy gets way too complicated - the beautiful simplicity of garlic breath was a stroke of sheer genius!

I began grinning halfway through, and was giggling hysterically by the... mehr anzeigen

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lazarus67

Hahaha....thanks a bunch.
Zombies...hmmmm

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hborger

Loved it! By the point where your narrator mentioned that Sam had his full attention ... you had mine! There was no way I was going to stop reading until I was finished. Thanks for the enjoyable tale!

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lazarus67

Thanks Heather. I was fun writing it...may somehow do a follow up.

hborger

Sounds like a great plan :)

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