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DEAD FLOWERS

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DEAD FLOWERS
Love missed...................................................................................................................................

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Ingeborg Kazek

Your words: "No one on the whole damn bus even hears my cries…they wouldn’t care, even if they did." How true. We should always have this in mind. Even when we try to help the whole world. They wouldn't care for us.

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lazarus67

True...in so many areas and ways.

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J.C. Laird

As usual, written with heart felt emotion. Sadness, longing, memories, and of course, love. Laz, you definitely have the art of "plucking ones heartstrings".

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lazarus67

Sorry'bout that...but thanks.

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Glynis Rankin

Lovely poetic and endearing Laz.
You encompass the heart of a Poet. The visuals were beautifully imagined in the eyes of lost love. This was simply an amazing read.

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JennaB.56

wow this was a beauty to read, and makes me think of someone I love. And I do love the cover too.

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felixthecat

Whoa! You knocked me out, Laz. This one has a true Literary bent to it. Your images and the narrative are superb. I should be getting used to it, but there's a more polished and powerful quality to Dead Flowers.

I didn't understand, though, the connection of the first part to the last...Slocum's Song. Explain?
Five thumbs up. Okay, just the two. Dazzling.

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storyteller4

Good read - Is the end "Kiss Me" by Slocum. I am not acquainted with this. But regardless, I love the images you project. right way my interpretation was that you have finally died, or are in process, and now can see her and almost but not quite join her. Great reflections. Makes a lump in my throat of emotion. some of your phrasing is great- Laz have you placed any of your pieces out on Amazon or other on-line places??? You... mehr anzeigen

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lazarus67

Thanks...maybe one day I'll put them together and out there.

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judycolella

I know I've read and commented on this lovely work previously, but if I'm not completely off here, I believe you made a few little changes. The addition of "Kiss Me" at the end was a beautiful touch, too. There's so much movement in this, so many levels - it's one of those stories that seem to get better with each reading. And by making little changes here and there, you're giving it an unintentional (perhaps) feeling of... mehr anzeigen

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