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Come away with me

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User: lazarus67
Come away with me

                                                                                                                                            


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William S. Taylor

Read your stuff, you old softie.
The lighning strike should have killed you and the word is 'beneath' and not 'under'.

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Adlin T.

Hi Lazarus, Your book "I Waited and You Didn't Come" is heartfelt and nice.

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Gelöschter User

The first one reminds me of the beautiful innocent chidhood where everything seems possible and the pure, untainted desires that we have. The second is an extremely overwhelming compostion in which even though the boy is completely broken on the inside but never loses hope .

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lazarus67

Thanks for reading

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JennaB.56

Oh what beautiful poems, the second one was a bit sad and I could picture him sitting on the bench waiting.

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lazarus67

Thanks Jenna.

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e.r.thaler

Hello Lazarus
Two beautiful poems, which tell of hope and the dream of freedom. I liked both very much and I enjoyed reading them.
Greetings from Switzerland, Evi

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lazarus67

Hi Evi. Thanks.

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felixthecat

Good to see you're writing again, Laz. These two little slices of lives are a great introduction back into the work all your friends and coming friends here can enjoy. Excellent!

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lazarus67

Thanks Patrick. Yes, been too long. Will try to be here more often... but no promises though.

usmcgunny

Hey Laz! Have missed you old school guys!

lazarus67

Hey. How you been?

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Gelöschter User

You're the artist painting a scene with words. Bravissimo!

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lazarus67

Thanks Dave.
Both of these bring out many different emotions

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uncson3

I really liked your stories....I look forward to your next body of work....Be blessed, Danny

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lazarus67

Thanks.
I've about a hundred here already.

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