I don't know if I am getting used to your mistakes or if you are improving your editing skills. That novel was good... and i mean GOOD! You have a lot of potential as an erotic author extraordinaire. I do like your style. Keep up the good work.
what do you mean the end shoot if you make it this good so far then I bet you can make it into a whole story try it one day man was this story really good made me want to have sex with Reggie lol can't wait to read more from you