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How to Spell Pray (Prey)

User: larakaye
How to Spell Pray (Prey)
On the intimacies of Munchausen syndrome

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Very powerful little story with different meanings that sound alike. You worked them in as a thought and at the same time your descriptive words held me to the story. It told it all./joeparent(eye) voted.

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Hello L4ra,

I just intercepted your transmission, and found it to be chilling. robottina enjoyed the homonyms in parentheses, since they gave an alternative syntax, creating ambiguity to the true intent.

Good job,

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I like this a lot. I'm not sure if I get the significance of the spelling thing? Where you put alternate spellings in parenthesis - I'd need that explained to me. But other than that, your writing style is fantastic - simple and elegant. The frank way the story depicts such a messed up situation creates a nice shocking effect that kept me curious.

I'd almost advise against broadcasting that it was going to be a Munchausen... mehr anzeigen

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What an honest account of a topic so often swept under the rug. One cannot help but appreciate the raw emotions of the characters involved. Beautifully written.

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Hi Lara,

1st - quick note, rules and regs for 'Family Stories' contest says you need a front cover, I'm sure. It would be awful if they disqualified on that basis. :)

I read your story. Your beginning was thought provoking and I loved the play on words throughout. You maintained tense throughout, your pace was steady and your tone consistent. You did so well in 'showing' your story, not just 'telling'.

I also liked the way you... mehr anzeigen

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Thank you for participating in our short
story writing contest "Family Stories".

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